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Solve It help screen mockups

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I'd really love any feeback on these help screen mockups. Making the interface easy to read and still full of information is hard.. Download the game for a better resolution.
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I like the layout of the first one, it's really neat. I also like that it states what you're supposed to do First. The final part "When you think you can Solve It..." is good too. The part in between though, I think could use a little touch-up.

The word 'Instructions' kind of confused me at first, because I thought you were referring to the help instructions in the help menu (the ones I was in the process of reading). A simple misunderstanding that passed quickly! It's a good word, although I probably would have called them 'Directives' instead. Then to make their connection to the 'Main list' more obvious and explanatory I would've called it the 'Directives list' (so if you prefer the word 'Instructions' I would've called it the 'Instructions list')

Basically I would have put the whole thing like this:

"What to do: Get 'avatar' to the 'star'.

Use the 'Directives list' to give 'avatar' 'Directives' to follow in order to get to the 'star'.
(To go with this I would've used pictures like the ones in Help Menu #3. Instead of the red color in #3 I would've gone for the green color. I also would've skipped the lines between the words and the windows because I found it a bit messy. I think the connection between the two was clear the way it was in mockup #1.)

When you think you can Solve It, press 'start' to see if 'avatar' gets to the 'star'."

Hope that wasn't too confusing and that it helped!