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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The word 'Instructions' kind of confused me at first, because I thought you were referring to the help instructions in the help menu (the ones I was in the process of reading). A simple misunderstanding that passed quickly! It's a good word, although I probably would have called them 'Directives' instead. Then to make their connection to the 'Main list' more obvious and explanatory I would've called it the 'Directives list' (so if you prefer the word 'Instructions' I would've called it the 'Instructions list')
Basically I would have put the whole thing like this:
"What to do: Get 'avatar' to the 'star'.
Use the 'Directives list' to give 'avatar' 'Directives' to follow in order to get to the 'star'.
(To go with this I would've used pictures like the ones in Help Menu #3. Instead of the red color in #3 I would've gone for the green color. I also would've skipped the lines between the words and the windows because I found it a bit messy. I think the connection between the two was clear the way it was in mockup #1.)
When you think you can Solve It, press 'start' to see if 'avatar' gets to the 'star'."
Hope that wasn't too confusing and that it helped!
It's compact and easy to read.
The other ones are too clottered & messy.